For my major "wiki edit" I looked a lot closer at the page I did my minor edit on. I thought of ways I could fix some of the structure, if there was any grammar to change, and if I could add anything.
I ended up adding two sentences (additionally to the one I originally made), italicized a few terms that needed it, added some internal and external links, and fixed wrong terminology (Christian to Born Again Christian). I like it but wish I could have added a picture...so hard if you don't have the rights.
Glenn Schwartz
http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Glenn_Schwartz&oldid=140435320
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